CONTINUITY FEEDBACK TASK!

 

CONTINUITY FEEDBACK TASK:

MR BUSH:

WWW:
  • Good titles- effective labelling 
  • POV shots- pans etc
  • Good mise- en- scene 
    • Location, costume
      • Used effectively 
  • Camera movement
    • Tracking, tilt, crane 
  • Talking into phone- good script 
    • Allows for narration 
  • OTS shot very good 
  • Varied + wide- ranging 
  • Good concise editing 
    • Story telling 
  • Good performances 

EBI:

  • Highlight keywords
  • Embed video 
  • Music non- diegetic sound


PEERS:

WWW:
  • Good variety of shots/ labelled correctly 
  • Good camera angles, shots, labelled, good editing
  • Love the crane shot 
  • Great narrative and editing 
  • Useage of many camera shots, movement and angles
  • Narrative was good 
  • Editing was good 
  • Camera angles

EBI:
  • Audio- build tension 
  • One cut was very poor 
  • Ending was abrupt 


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