CINEMATOGRAPHY FEEDBACK!

 

CINEMATOGRAPHY FEEDBACK:

MR BUSH:

WWW:

  • Good titles- effective labelling 
  • POV shots- Pans etc
  • Good mise-En-scene
  •         Locations, costume (used effectively)
  • Camera movement  
  •         tracking, tilt, crane
  • Talking into phone
  • OTS shot- very good 
  • Varied + wide ranging
  • Good editing 
  • Good story telling 
  • Good performances

EBI:

  • Highlight keywords
  • Embed video 
  • Add music (non- diegetic sounds)

PEERS:

WWW:

  • Good camera shots and angles
  • use of many camera shots, placement and angles
  • great narrative and editing 
  • love the crane shot 
  • Very good camera angles, shots, labelled, good editing 
  • camera angles 
  • editing was good 
  • narrative was good 
  • Good use of different shots
  • labelled correct shots

EBI:

  • One of the cuts was pretty poor
  • ending was abrupt
  • add audio to build tension 

SELF ASSESSMENT:

Overall, I believe that my video was not too bad especially knowing that including different shots in the same video can be a little tough. We were able to present a story including the different shots, although some parts in terms of the sound needed more room for development, we were able to present a good performance with the labelled angles and shots. in terms of Mise en scene out costumes and settings flowed really well with the narrative.

WWW:

  • We used a variety of different shots 
  • A variety of camera movements was used 
  • The shots were labelled correctly 
  • story telling made sense 

EBI:

  • Add some music


LEARNER RESPONSE:

I have learned a lot about cinematography and how a different shot used at the wrong time can change the whole view of the audience. There are many shots and these different shots present a different idea or emotion to the audience. If I were to do this again I would make sure the editing is a bit more accurate making sure that it is smooth and that you don't see the changes in the different cuts. For further improvements, I would want to play around with adding music to make it more tensed or amusing for the audience and i would also want to play around with the transitioning depending on the type of story it is. 

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